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A quick entry to the seven deadly sins contest. I might do more, if I have time.

Tell me what you think please!

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Edit: changed the spelling error! Thanks to those who pointed it out to me.
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^Katara-Alchemist Apr 2, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks.
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~ariscreates Jan 8, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
Very creative. A standout, I think. Great use of typography (which I am a big fan of) to illustrate your point.
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^Katara-Alchemist Jan 8, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks for the lovely comment.
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*GavinMichelli Dec 22, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Very clever! Since you asked for critique...generally, you don't want to stretch typefaces too much. "High cholesterol" is pretty tough to read. It probably would have been better to use a more extended typeface, rather than stretching it. In fact, it might have been cool to use a few different typefaces (but not more than 3!!!), rather than the same one.

But that's just since you asked for critique ;P I honestly wish I had thought of this. A great idea, very well executed. Good luck in the contest!
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^Katara-Alchemist Dec 22, 2011  Student General Artist
Thanks for the feedback. I've never really done any graphic design stuff, so this was basically a shot in the dark. XD
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*GavinMichelli Dec 23, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Well, as someone who does it professionally, I can tell you that this is damn good! Most first timers try to cram as many photos and words as they can into a design, and that's just bad. Simplicity and clarity make all the difference. Great job, and good luck in the contest!
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^Katara-Alchemist Dec 23, 2011  Student General Artist
Thanks for the feedback.
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^Katara-Alchemist Dec 18, 2011  Student General Artist
Thanks.
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