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I stalk the night
and hide
amoungst the shadows
I'll wait
as long as it takes
I follow you
don't you see
the maddness
in my eyes
every time
I pass you by?
I see you
You think your safe
but in this world
of death and murder
safe
is just a fleeting dream
I quietly slip
behind you
with cats grace
you try to scream
but no one cares
no one hears
you see
the glint of steel
the your screams
of fear
are replaced
by ones of pain

Now I sit and watch
as your blood
turns the dust
a beautiful red
dripping slowly down
your breath is ragged,
screams long gone
I see your eyes
staring at me
Wondering
wondering who I am

Then the Alley
lights up
red and blue
and once more
I slip into the night
looking for new prey
©2007-2009 =katara-alchemist
:iconkatara-alchemist:

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Just a random poem I wrote a while back, tell me what you think.

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:iconkatara-alchemist:
exactly

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10 days till we die
9 days till we cry
8 days till we run
7 days till we scream
6 days till we plan
5 days till we learn
4 days till we suspect
3 days till we disappear
2 days till we laugh
1 day till we play our last game

Poem is posted in gallery
:iconsoulesslife:
omg thats really good :-O

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I love lemons ^.^ you can eat 'em and read 'em XD
:iconkatara-alchemist:
thanks.

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10 days till we die
9 days till we cry
8 days till we run
7 days till we scream
6 days till we plan
5 days till we learn
4 days till we suspect
3 days till we disappear
2 days till we laugh
1 day till we play our last game

Poem is posted in gallery
:iconkatara-alchemist:
Thanks! Wow, i haven't had any people comment on this is awhile. I'm really glad you like it! It's one of my favourtie peices i've written.

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10 days till we die
9 days till we cry
8 days till we run
7 days till we scream
6 days till we plan
5 days till we learn
4 days till we suspect
3 days till we disappear
2 days till we laugh
1 day till we play our last game

Poem is posted in gallery
:iconxxoctobermoonxx:
yeah its really creative! although it makes me wonder what you were doing at the time. ^^giggle^^
:iconkatara-alchemist:
^^; i don't really remember what i was doing at the time. But i think i was in school wondering how one person (aka my teacher) could possibly anoy me so much in such a short amount of time.

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10 days till we die
9 days till we cry
8 days till we run
7 days till we scream
6 days till we plan
5 days till we learn
4 days till we suspect
3 days till we disappear
2 days till we laugh
1 day till we play our last game

Poem is posted in gallery
:iconxxoctobermoonxx:
lol. imagine what your teacher would have said if she took up that poem? ;)

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